Sunday, November 2, 2008



Your promises hold true and strong
Like wax before a fire,
And the person that you claim you are
Proves further, you're a liar.

Because you cause all those that cross your path
To wilt like dying flowers,
Yet you raise yourself on pedestals,
And talk and brag for hours.

You're the greatest thing thats ever happened
To this tiny town
And yet the breeze blows calm
And sun shins brighter
When you're not around.

And note, your heart is cold
And your desires are all tainted,
Which have nothing in resemblance
To the facade you think you've painted.

But the thing which ails me most
And makes my veins run cold with fear
Is that I share these things in confidence
Alone, before the mirror.


-Victor Tinsdale



1 comment:

Myke said...

Dude, Victor, this poem is so rad. I almost got chills at the end of the last stanza.